I think this photograph works well as it is clear what the fruit has spelled out, to improve however i would try and place fruit next to each other a bit closer size as it does alter the shapes of the letters quite a lot. I would also try and keep the background as close to a white shade as possible so it is easy to put the photographs together to make a word.
What I like about this photograph is that none of the fruits that can be seen are whole so this makes it an interesting abstract style photograph. To improve this photo I would just mix the fruit up a little bit as in the top right hand corner the red fruits do not stand out against each other. If I were to do this shoot again I would use even more bright and exotic fruits as I think these have worked out very well.
I have developed this from my first shoot as I felt the letters are an effective way to present the food. I also created an animation which worked really well and therefore will continue this technique throughout my work.
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